Response

YOu are on the right path A good observation about the violence to gain power. YOu have some good points in your writing and youo have mentioned some good examples . Toi furhter develop you might want to bring in quoptes to help develop your point. Also could you try and work in a connection in your wriitng. I like your honesty in your analysis of how the group is wroking you have some goals. Keep up the good work.